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CORRESPONDENCE: <br />MS. NICHOLSON: <br /> Agenda item 4, correspondence, Comm. 2011-009. Do I have a <br />motion to accept and file this communication? This was the testimony that was handed <br />out at the last meeting from Mr. Fred Housel and it has to do with – he’s saying <br />elimination. We’re talking about consolidation of community development plan steering <br />and action committees in the draft report. Is there a motion to accept and file? <br />MOTION:MR. O’HARA: <br /> So moved. <br />MR. ARMOUR: <br /> Second. <br />MS. NICHOLSON: <br /> Any discussion? We will accept and file communication 2011-009. <br />DISCUSSION REGARDING ITEMS PREVIOUSLY RECOMMENDED TO BE PLACED <br />IN DRAFT REPORT/FORMAT OF DRAFT REPORT/REVISION OF DRAFT REPORT: <br />MS. NICHOLSON: <br /> Now to the hard part. Discussion of our report. We can take this <br />one in order. A says see attached draft report. We can go ahead and talk about <br />Gloria’s draft conclusion, which thank you so much for taking that on. Gloria, go ahead. <br />MS. WONG: <br /> I just wanted to go over a comment that I, we hadn’t finished the <br />10 primary recommendations but the conclusion that I drafted was to, if our audience is <br />the Mayor and the County Council, I put in quotes from the Mayor and from Pete <br />Hoffmann. And it’s a call to action thanking the people that participated and the last <br />paragraph is basically a call to action. And this is your draft, the last paragraph, for the <br />County Council and the Mayor to act on whatever we said. And I await for them <br />whatever else that we want to do based on finishing the 10 point, primary points that we <br />wanted to promote. <br />MS. NICHOLSON: <br /> So, are you recommending that we move into our 10 points first and <br />then come back to your conclusion? Would that be helpful? <br />MS. WONG: <br /> Whatever you choose. I just wanted to explain how I wrote this. <br />MS. NICHOLSON: <br /> Since we’re on this, I’d rather just go ahead and talk about the <br />conclusion, which I found very good. Thank you so much. I just have a couple of <br />grammatical things to correct but that’s it. Any other substantive discussion on the <br />conclusion? It was really superb. It really wraps things up very well. My only <br />grammatical things were in the fourth line – there should be a comma after if any. <br />MR. MATSUDA: <br /> Yes. <br />MS. NICHOLSON: <br /> Changes comma, if any comma.And then, in the third paragraph, <br />we’re quoting from Pete Hoffmann, fifth line down, I think there’s an apostrophe in aint. <br />MS. O’HARA: <br /> Yes, there is. <br />6 <br /> <br />