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Comments on the COH General Plan Update Draft
Applied Life Sciences LLC
Overview
The authors of the draft GP update are to be congratulated for a comprehensive and
appropriate document. The emphasis on sustainability and adaptability is critical as the
local and global climate events continue to change at an increasing rate. The ability of local
and state governments to adapt to these rapidly arising changes will challenge the very
operation structure of government. This challenge will alter our way of life and our
personal and collective security.
Comments in order of occurrence in the document and do not represent personal priorities
Section 1, page 23
Limiting impervious surfaces in developments will improve water quality in any watershed.
Stormwater runoff in urban areas carries nutrients, chemicals, and some microbes of
concern to the receiving waters. In West Hawaii, stormwater moves the brackish
subterranean estuary (STE) very quickly as it flows ebbing and flooding to the sea.
Most of the receiving waters (marine) are Federally Listed as Impaired.2 As such reducing
impervious surfaces will be part of any watershed remediation via required TMDL3
programs.
Page 24, 1.17
Water quality monitoring is valuable for many reasons. However, monitoring without action
triggers is of little value in improving watershed water quality. Additionally, what is monitored
may need to be site and issue-specific.
Page 29 Actions
2 State of Hawaii 303(D)Report to the EPA https://health.hawaii.gov/cwb/files/2018/09/Final-2018-State-of-Hawaii-Water-Quality-Monitoring-
Assessment-Report.pdf
3 Total Daily Maximum Load requirements https://www.epa.gov/tmdl/overview-total-maximum-daily-loads-tmdls
Identify areas at risk of flooding and to the extent possible,prevent development that is not
entirely resistant to such risks. The most effective approach is to limit significantly human
structures in such areas. This should include regions that have a higher hurricane risk.
Page 34 Limit GHGE's
All county departments must look at what they can do to decrease their carbon footprint and
increase CO2 sequestration. This will help develop a similar public ethic and actions.
Wastewater treatment plants release greenhouse gases. Assuring proper aeration limits methane
production while encouraging CO2. At Kealakehe WWTP, the opportunity to create offsets by
local PV arrays is an option that was overlooked, yet still viable.
Page 35 1.73
The mapping of areas at the most significant risk from SLR(sea level rise) is essential.
Concurrent with the mapping, introducing the concept of"coastal retreat"should be discussed
decades in advance of when it will be appropriate and necessary.
Page 38 Drinking Water Policies
Not mentioned is the Counties prerogative to adopt the most recent Uniform Plumbing Codes.
The version currently mandated by the state is the minimum for all counties. The counties are
free to adopt more recent versions.
The most recent version provides a requirement for water-conserving appliances and fixtures. It
also provides for home greywater reuse. The current standard by HDOH is prohibitive for most
people.
Price water on a progressive scale to greatly discourage overuse and waste. Irrigating large
lawns in coastal West Hawaii with drinking water should be prohibited within ten years.
Require the significant freshwater irrigators to manage water use consistent with the
Environmental Evapotranspiration rate for the specific plants irrigated. The Calfornia Irrigation
Management System has reduced ag water use in CA by 13%while increasing crop yields by
8%.4
Adopt policies to protect the"cloud forests" USGS estimates for Hawaii indicate dewfall in the
forest equals the rainfall contribution to the aquifers.
120.
What is meant by water purification? EPA Safe Drinking Water Standard, perhaps?
4 CIMIS https://intemetofwater.org/data-stories/evapotranspiration-data-saves-water-and-increases-crop-yield/
121.
Add emphasis for better congruity between Planning and the Dept of Water Supply as it pertains
to new development.
129. Maximize reclaimed water(wastewater is the wrong term) to reduce freshwater use gallon
for gallon.
Action 2.13 to 2.19 supported.
Page 43
131 a. Nutrient management is best achieved by soil and petiole analysis and not by guidelines.
Then the rates of fertilization must be applied with the maximum uptake efficient for each plant
species. This may include fertigation.
c. Irrigation is managed by both the evapotranspiration and the plant uptake capacity. In
many W. Hawaii golf courses, the soil profile is so shallow the water hold capacity is limited;
therefore,the needed water has to be applied at a slower rate. This means the irrigation system
has to be sized appropriately.
2.26 Use the green technology for stormwater management and discourage the future use of
dry wells." Dry wells are a large hydrologic conduit to groundwater and the STE. Despite the
claims of a few engineers, there is no generic geochemical reaction that removes pollutants from
stormwater.5
Page 45
136. Currently, HDOH prohibits homeowners from receiving and using reclaimed water. They
cite health concerns. To be precise modern DNA analysis fails to find bacterial pathogens in
human feces.6 However, in the and Irvine Ranch CA,homeowners have been using reclaimed
water on their home landscaping for over 40 years.? The HDOH administrative rules must be
changed ifwe are to maximize reuse.
Action 20 .27 - 2.31 Supported
Whenever a sewer line is installed, a parallel reclaimed water line should also be installed. The
cost ofthe pipe is minuscule compared to the cost of digging a trench in blue rock.
5 Izuka,S.K.(2011).Potential effects ofroadside dry wells on groundwater quality on the Island ofHawaii-Assessmentusing numerical
groundwater models.U.S.Geological Survey.
6 Tan,BoonFei,et al."Next-generation sequencing(NGS)for assessment of microbial waterquality:current progress,challenges,and future
opportunities."Frontiers in Microbiology 6(2015): 1027.
https://www.irwd.com/services/recycled-water
Page 45
Objective. All available evidence suggests that septic systems are every bit as polluting as
cesspits and cesspools. If you are going to recommend a technology, then modify it to include
Nutrient Removal Septic Systems" These simple systems are replacing the tens of thousands of
septic systems in New York and Maine.8
This 2017 approved septic system does not
remove nutrients or bacteria. The only
function ofthe tank is to remove solids, so the
A HDOH Approved System leach lines do not get blocked.
The hole like most on the island is in lava and
blue rock. There is no deep soil. The leach
line is bedded in gravel. The wastewater will
move downward faster than most established
cesspits.
Since this system is completely aerobic there is
no denitrification as can occur in anaerobic
cesspools with standing water.
8 https://www.savebuzzardsbay.org/wp-content/uploads/2018/05/2018-04-17-Decision-Makers-Workshop-Laver-Cake-Septic-Systems.pdf
137
This will be difficult to prove the matter. Given the nearshore water and the STE's are already
contaminated. In virtually all STE conveyances of water to the sea are nutrient-rich. Instead, the
county could require a 90%reduction of nutrients as a preferred option to prevent further
degradation of the receiving
Aerial Thermal Infrared Imaging: waters.
Nutrient-rich Groundwater Plumes from"Big Island's"Kona Coast
This research by Johnson and
Glenn in 20089 shows cool
of STE water moving into sea.
The cooler water has the
l< loko-tC,(„kor , , - greater the nutrient
Nationa+Park % concentration. The nitrogen
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with sewage sources.
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185 reduction is key.
138 - 144 Supported
145. DWS needs to become a comprehensive water manager and subject to Council policy
directives.
Propose 146. Do not allow the further use of Underground Injection Wells for wastewater.
Below the State UIC line homes and businesses dispose of massive volumes ofjust secondarily
treated sewage. The near coastal well communicates directly with the STE and hence, the
ocean. For example, Mauna Lani discharges up to 400000 gallons per day into a coastal well.
9 Johnson,A.G.,Glenn,C.R.,Burnett,W.C.,Peterson,R.N.,&Lucey,P.G.(2008).Aerial infrared imaging reveals large nutrient-
rich groundwater inputs to the ocean. Geophysical Research Letters,35(15).
Since UIC is apart ofthe Safe Drinking Water program, it has not been regulated under the Clean
Water Act. The Recent 9th Circuit Ruling now requires an NPDES permit, but HDOH is not
enforcing the ruling. However, the legislature in 2018 enacted law that prohibits the Director of
HDOH from approving new sewage injection wells. There are other commercial options.
Page 47
Action
2.32 - 2.46 Support with comments
2.34 The county should take the lead. The Cesspool working Group has yet to identify any
alternatives even though many are commercialized. Frankly, the CWG lacks expertise. The
county would be wise to adopt performance criteria for any IWS. Such criteria are rather simple,
reduce TSS and BOD to Secondary Treated Sewage Standards. Reduce Total N and Total P by90%, Reduce E. coli by 5 logs, or 100,000 fold.
2.39 The 300-foot distance to the property line is far too lenient and unfair. The quarter-mile is
more appropriate, yet give the blue rock, the cost of a short sewer line could exceed$400,000.
More shallow vacuum sewer lines may reduce the cost when multiple homes fall within the 1/4
mile rule.
2.43 This holds the most promise. The small decentralized treatment works privately operated
at the neighborhood scale.
Page 48
Zero Waste is the goal. How to get there is challenging. Retail packing is a colossal waste for
all communities. Congress largely ignores the matter.
2.47 -2.55 Support
Explore waste to energy but not including incineration or any process that produces GHEGs or
toxic ash.